Sigh
She Always Seemed So
Clumsy
and
Carefree
Her Mind Was A Heedless
KAELIDOSCOPE
Her Attitude Was Airy
But Here She Sat
Yearning For Her Own Solidity
She Needed
Stability
She Questioned Her True Sanity
I Try To Commiserate
I Wanted to Feel Empathy
But Instead I Found Solace In
Her Search For Her Own...
So Now I Sit And I Sigh Relief
There Was Comfort
Knowing She Was Silently Suffering
A Consolation
Throwing Me To Feel A Bit
Clumsy and Carefree
Just As She...
Throwing Me To Feel A Bit
Clumsy and Carefree
Just As She...
Is this the piece you sent me over Facebook? I totally forgot to look up the words that I didn't know so I could give my opinion, I'm sorry. :( But this is great! I like the rhythm when you read it aloud. :)
ReplyDeleteyes it is the piece! thank you so much!(:
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ReplyDeleteCaitlyn's right - this is really very lyrical. It does sound pretty read aloud with repeating sounds. Very well written! Bravo!
ReplyDeletePascha this is beautiful! I relate so much to most of this.
ReplyDeletePascha this is beautiful! I relate so much to most of this.
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